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One example
of how Roth uses suspense at the end of a chapter is in chapter seventeen when
she says, “It’s the first time I have been really eager to be one of them.
Which means I have to survive the next stage of initiation (Roth226).” So at
first when you read the first sentence your like, OK, she wants to be
Dauntless, but then when you read the last line, a bunch of questions pop up in
your head. Like: What’s that supposed to mean? What is the next stage of
initiation? Will she survive? What will happen next? Will people find out she
is divergent? All of the questions make the reader want to keep reading the
story to find out what happens next.
This is a
very good strategy and I hope to use it in my writing. I know that I struggle
sometimes at intriguing the reader and I really think that a little bit of
suspense might fix my problem I encourage everyone who is writing a story or
narrative to build suspense and leave cliffhangers at the end of
chapters/paragraphs. I will keep everyone updated on more suspenseful things
that if find throughout the book, and how the keep the reader intrigued and
asking for more.

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